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The New Circle 135/? 
10th-Jan-2016 08:29 pm
Title: The New Circle
Fandoms: Smallville/Secret Circle
Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Whitney Fordman, Major Dru-Zod, Greg Arkin, Cassie Blake, Diana Meade, Mikhail Balcoin, Lucas Dunleavy, Faye Chamberlain/Byron Moore, Adam Knight, Zatanna Zatara, Bart Allen, Clark Kent, Pete Ross, Jor-El, Vika Balcoin, Van McNulty...
Rating: T
Disclaimer: Don't own any original material used in the television series or artwork, they belong to their respective creators. I have merely tweaked them for my story.
Summary: Chloe Sullivan had a normal-ish life before the circle and John Blackwell turned her life upside down and gave new meaning to the unexplained weirdness that goes on in Smallville. Now life's a witch, she's a part of a circle she's not too sure she wants to be bound to, and not only do they have to worry about Witch-Hunters, but unknowingly to them another circle is on the hunt too.

Chapter 135 - During: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9045566/135/The-New-Circle

11th-Jan-2016 02:41 pm (UTC)
Cassie motioned her head towards Faye. "Her mother murdered my mother." Faye nodded."And then Diana's grandmother tried to murder Cassie."
"And then I tried to murder Diana," Cassie mumbled. "Although at the time it was to get her dark magic to react - but I still had all the intent to do it because her magic had to know I really was going to kill her."

He stared into those eyes and tried to reach her. "Everything's alright. I'm not going to let you go anywhere or be hurt. I promise you." His voice trembled. "I won't let you leave me." THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!! #TEAMWHITNEY

'Peering out at the city of entranced people - humans and witches alike - Dax-Ur tightened his grip on the balcony's railing and smiled.' IS THE WHOLE WORLD ENTRANCED??????? :O

25th-Jan-2016 08:40 pm (UTC)
Yeah, and she forgot to add: "And then Diana and I murdered our father"... SO yeah, that is the Balcoin family for you!

They've really come a long way from chapter one, huh?

Nope, you actually get a view into the outside world in the next chapter!
11th-Jan-2016 06:12 pm (UTC) - doing the Ew dance
So so so sososo glad this isn't titled "During Part 1." I don't think I can take much more of the visual of molting reptiles. You added Claws and Scales! I missed their human faces and fabulous shoes. Pretty icked out that they're molting also.

The idea of Chloe being covered in thousands of cracked wounds since she was rejecting the shift had me panicking Troy Barnes style when he said, "My whole brain is crying!" on the show Community (Season 2, Episode 2).

I anticipated roaring, because Davis, Chloe, and Zod heard Rao when he was molting. But this mass blackout is not good. If I were Rao, I'd be attacking since I could probably sense that Chloe was indisposed. A scouting team observing the town could report that everyone was not moving.

Then again the dornhounds and hybrid plants can potentially be pretty nasty to invaders. I wonder if those butterflies/harbingers she released with Whitney have the potential to turn in to monsters like they did in Apokalips.

I figure the blackout was happening in order of those that had shared the closest mind connection with Chloe except for the members of the Original families and her circles. Like starting at a wave crest going down into the trough then back up to a wave crest if you're measuring the intensity of closeness to Chloe.

Dax-ur that shady such and such. Does he have wings underneath too since he has the black squiggles too? Can he shift? Who is this guy?

Ok, I gotta step back from the intense stuff and talk about the slumber parties that could have been. How fun would that have been! If I were Mik I would have grabbed a bean bag from the old meeting cave room before the other guys had even shown up. Why do these dudes like making it harder on themselves like martyrs? You have magic ding dong!

The flask idea. Lol!

I honestly don't blame the girls for taking the house, because it has toilets. I'm sure the caves would have provided, but considering the throne room is medieval, I don't want to risk it. CLEAN Running water is a glorious invention.

Why do I get the feeling that this is the closest to Faye's party we're going to get?

Oops getting dark again. Ok. I had no way of picturing Chloe's kiddo, because ball outta left field. And then Zod was the pappa and Jor's family was alive. First off, Team Whitney! Second of all, Jor sucks at making alternative realities to fit Chloe's dream. Zod as father, pfffft! Although, I wonder what was originally planned for Whitney's segment. Not a lot of human situations where layers are sloughed off. Hmm, Chloe covered in chocolate and Whitney has to...down girl! You're keeping this Rated T right?

Pretty glad Jor didn't pop in like some specter Obi Wan. I figured, since he was in the trance inducing the dreams, he'd be actively directing, but it seems like he was just a passive conduit.

Vika is such a go with the flow gal. I wonder how many centuries it took her to achieve that Zen attitude? Two bad husbands would have me pissed for a long while. If she was the last one to black out, I imagine she's the first to awaken, but to which situation will she awaken to. Surrounded by Rao's men or to a mild-mannered, molted, and mega powerful Chloe? or, gulp, both situations about to verbal judo into or out of a war?

What are you gonna do?

25th-Jan-2016 08:44 pm (UTC) - Re: doing the Ew dance
It almost WAS During (part one) but I decided against it! lol Yes, they needed to have a little appearance, but as they are molting they had to be in their true, feral forms.

There will be roaring! (Good memory by the way!!) She just hasn't gotten to that part yet, she's still in the beginning stages and hasn't quite found her voice.

The next chapter will answer some of your questions so I shant comment on them here :)

I'm sure Faye will never give up on having a party - but there will always be something happening so she'll have to up her ante if she actually wants it to happen!

I'm between T and M - not sure as yet which rating I'll keep it!

Vika basically has no choice but to go with it, and she gets that, so that helps I suppose! lol
24th-Jan-2016 07:03 pm (UTC) - Awaiting Chapter 136...
Boo Dax-Ur. Gotta hate the villain--they make the good stuff so much better. And while I'm nervous about what his plan and how bad it might be for Chloe and the others I look forward to them emerging victorious. Love the Chloe/Whitney interaction. And the Chloe/Whitney/Zod dynamic.

Wondering if Rao might wind up putting in an appearance to save his daughter and her circles. Just because Rao might have a disagreement/battle/whatever with his daughter doesn't mean he wants anyone else trying to beat up/defeat her and ultimately him too. Nothing like the birth of a child to bring the grandparents to you.

Looking forward to chapter 136...

25th-Jan-2016 08:46 pm (UTC) - Re: Awaiting Chapter 136...
There has been little Chloe/Whitney/Zod interaction due to how hectic things have been for them, but there's a tiny one (which is still important) in the next chapter!

Rao makes an appearance in the next chapter - which is actually quite important! So we shall see :)
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