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Memories 5/? 
24th-Aug-2009 11:21 am
shadowglove88
Title: Memories
Fandom: Merlin
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin, Morgana/Gwen, Lancelot/Will
Rating: T
Disclaimer: Don't own Merlin
Summary: Merlin is tired of the centuries in between reincarnations in which he's so alone, so he stops looking for Arthur, making a life for himself. And yet Arthur comes back into his life, and even without his memories Prince Arthur is playing for keeps.
Note: Lancelot is a little ooc because I needed a fun, flirty friend for Merlin and somehow I didn't see Will as flirty---unless it was towards Merlin.
Warning: AU. Gay People EVERYWHERE! lol

 

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Comments 
24th-Aug-2009 11:09 pm (UTC)
Hey! Sophie is just so lovely xD
As Valiant is xD So funny^^
I like that chapter cause we had all the characters and all that is important about their relationships^^
Can't wait to read the next.
I do feel that arthur doesn't want to wait anymore! :p
24th-Aug-2009 11:45 pm (UTC)
Well, I don't think that if you're not exactly the nicest person in one life you'll still be that way in all your others, so that's another reason why Edwin, Sophia and Valiant were all portrayed nicely in this story.
25th-Aug-2009 12:07 am (UTC)
Possessive!Arthur saves the day, lol! I continue to love this and I look forward to seeing what happens next. At least now Merlin knows what's really the case between Arthur and Sophia. I'm glad Sophia was likable. I was worried she wouldn't be, but she's a good person to play along with the charade. It must not be an easy thing to do, I'm sure.

Poor Morgana and Gwen though! Hopefully they can get past that - Gwen's in shock right now and rightly so. :(
25th-Aug-2009 02:46 am (UTC)
Well, I don't know about "saves the day"...but he DOES comandeer Merlin completely and get his way...lol
25th-Aug-2009 12:23 am (UTC)
Ah, I'm somewhat glad that you didn't picture Sophia as a 'villain'. Well, at least not in the term of disrupting Arthur and Merlin's relationship; though she kind of hurt Morgana and Gwen. It's... refreshing XD
25th-Aug-2009 02:48 am (UTC)
Yes, she might have hurt Morgana and Gwen, but it wasn't intentional, and I guess that's really what counts! :D
25th-Aug-2009 12:31 am (UTC)
I am officially and totally hooked! Not only on this story (though it is absolutely fucking fantastic!), but your older ones as well. <3
You're a great writer for your fandoms and I added you as a friend to comb through your amazingness with more ease lol.

P.S. I totally imagined them getting married with reincarnated!Gaius as either the minister or their adoptive heir (just for hilarity sake of Gaius being younger than them and watching him play with his chem set *giggles madly*)
25th-Aug-2009 02:50 am (UTC)
Hooked? Really? I'm so happy! Yay! *jumps around, gets tired, stops jumping* lol
haha, I hadn't ever thought of reincarnated!Gaius being YOUNGER than them....sounds almost sacriligious! *lmao*
25th-Aug-2009 01:20 am (UTC)
Oh, poor Morgana and Gwen. What a horrible way to find something like that out! (Though Morgana should have been up front about it all from the beginning.)

I do like what you did with Sophia and Valiant, though.
25th-Aug-2009 02:51 am (UTC)
Yes, Morgana really should, but don't worry, Gwen has a very forgiving heart---she'll need one with Morgana! lol I'm glad you enjoyed my version of Sophia and Valiant!
25th-Aug-2009 03:08 am (UTC)
Oh, yours is the first Sophia I've liked, lol. :)

Oh, hurry! What happens when they get back to the flat? You meanie, cutting it off right before! :P
25th-Aug-2009 01:39 pm (UTC)
I'm glad that you like my Sophia, and YES, I AM meanie! :P lol
25th-Aug-2009 03:55 am (UTC) - OOH LA LA
Love Sophia already knowing about Arthur and stuff, and how Merlin was the one who made Arthur realize he was gay. :D And yay on Sophia being the encouraging one, here!

Also loving poor Gwen and her reaction to Morgana's being a princess. ^_^ God, I can't imagine what it's like to discover that. Especially when she's still trying to figure out she's not straight! ^_^

And, will being Merlin's old friend = ♥ ^_^
25th-Aug-2009 01:38 pm (UTC) - Re: OOH LA LA
Yes, Sophia and Morgana are to Arthur like Gwen and Lancelot are to Merlin...and Valiant is the silent oil tycoon with no lines....lol
Yeah, it's doubly hard for Gwen because she was just trying to get used to the fact that she mightn't be as straight as she'd always thought, and then she has something ELSE to try and get used to....
25th-Aug-2009 04:08 am (UTC)
Nice chapter; I probably have nothing to add to whatever's been said, but still. I have to show my appreciation. :) Good development of plot.
25th-Aug-2009 01:39 pm (UTC)
Thank you for the show of appreciation! It's appreciated! :D
25th-Aug-2009 01:03 pm (UTC) - Hmmmm....
Yes, Merlin is learning now that he is Arthur's *nods in approval*
25th-Aug-2009 01:41 pm (UTC) - Re: Hmmmm....
*claps hands* It's been approved! yay! And yes, Merlin is just going to have to give in already! lol
25th-Aug-2009 10:46 pm (UTC)
This has been on my 'to read' list for a while and i'm kind of annoyed now it took me so long! I thought this was brilliant, a really clever idea and it's playing out so well. I love how you're showing the reality of Merlin's immortality and also how all the characters are present and correct! Also, this has to be the first time i've ever read a sympathetic Sophia and... I really like it. It makes such a nice change and even in that one short scene I got to really like her and her lovely friendship with Arthur.

I can't wait to read the next part now!
25th-Aug-2009 11:23 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you got around to reading it and enjoyed it as well! Immortality is really overrated, and everyone wants to be immortal, so I wanted to show the cons (like being alone) and so I'm so happy everyone is liking it.
26th-Aug-2009 01:28 am (UTC)
This shows you how spoiled I am--I was so disappointed that there wasn't an update to this lovely fic today. How dare you have a "real" life--fanfic needs updating! :):)

And just so you know, yes I am kidding :):) I am looking forward to seeing what happens next, and I promise to wait patiently. :):)
26th-Aug-2009 01:41 am (UTC)
hahahaha! Well, would it make you feel better if I said I didn't update because I was trying to work on a short sequel to my Kal/Chloe oneshot?
26th-Aug-2009 08:13 am (UTC)
This is amazing. Don't bail out on us, now.
I don't care what you do as long as you keep going.
Really captivating, amazingly written.
Beautiful idea.
26th-Aug-2009 12:31 pm (UTC)
I won't leave you all hanging! lol Dont worry this will be updated!
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27th-Aug-2009 12:27 am (UTC)
glad you enjoyed!
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